Once upon a time in a peaceful country called N’naani’s landya…
Wait… Actually, No.
Once upon a time in country full of chaos called N’naani’s landya, people were dying and you could only live by being as cruel as Cruella. Also…
To be honest it is not that far away. It is even closer than you might think and the real name is “REAL WORLD”. The characters are you and your family and what makes the story are your problems.
What do you think? What could happen?
Tell me.
XOXO,
Writer Girl.
I like your story but I have no clue on what to add… sorry!
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Hey Kara,
I actually understand what you mean. You may be confused, so let me explain it to you.
As, I said in my about me page, I really like writing. So much that I don’t like when I have too many restrictions or a path to follow while writing. That is why when I wrote the beginning of this story, I wanted people like you who found my blog, to get inspired by anything outside of our walls. So, they could be the main character of their story (only if they want to). God knows how much we like spotlights. I wanted you guys, to think about it and to write a story (even if this is a very short one).
Sorry if it was a bit confusing.
Let me know if you want more details or you want to discuss about anything else.
XOXO,
Da writer.
Wow N’naani,
i did’nt think of it that way..
Thank you for Information
You’re welcome Karah.
It was a pleasure,
Da writer.
i really like your story but i think you should try to make it more dramatic just what i think but great job on the story!
Thank you!!!!!
I was also thinking about 2nd part and being kind of dramatic as you said.
If you have any idea, tell me.
Da writer.
Just that little bit hooked me. Id like more if there is more. I hope so. It a twist on and original.
Hey, sure I’ll write more.
If you have any idea about I could had on, tell me.
Thank you,
Da writer.
Dear naaniisd20,
Your blog post is really interesting. When I think of this, I think zombie apocalypse. I think this because when you say with your family in a terrible country, I would think zombie apocalypse with being with my famiily in a bad country. If I was in this, I would probably hide out with my family and have a baseball bat and a flashlight along with my phone. I would like to ask what would you do and how would you do it? Thankyou for reading my comment. Here is a link to my blog, please copy and paste this into your search bar. https://www.writeabout.com/members/lb7852-s130062/
Hey Joanthan,
I think that I would just ride to mexico with my family and hide in an underground stash with a lot of junk food and all my electronics. I would not forget to bring a generator with me and to download enough movies that I would watch until my death. Hopefully I’d get out when I would be 53 and a half years old and just realize that it was a joke.
To be honest, I would just have the junk food, my electronics, and my family with me locked in the toilets.
I got to admit that your idea is way better than mine.
Thank you for coming to my blog and for sure I’ll go see yours,
Da writer.
Dear N’naani,
I actually really like this story, and I especially really like your sense of humor. I found this really funny and entertaining.
If I had to add on to the story, I don’t think I would go very far, since I try to be as nice as I can. So, being cruel will be extremely difficult for me in this story. Also, what happened to N’naani’s Landya that made it so chaotic? Again, I really enjoyed your sense of humor and story.
My blog – https://www.writeabout.com/student/
Sincerely,
Luisa A.
Hey Luisa,
It makes me really happy to know that you enjoyed my writing. You’re right being cruel would be very difficult in this story.
About N’naani’s Landya, I am not really sure about what happened. I think N’naani’s Landya is just a representation of the Garden of Eden which just changed and lost his purity over time with wars and cruelty all over the world. Yep, I guessed this what happened.
Hope we’ll talk even more later,
Da writer.
N’naani,
You have a very cool story. I think that my family and I would just take a plane to the farthest away country and live there. Haha, that’s all I really think could happen if it was my story. Very good writing!
Sincerely,
Ryan https://www.writeabout.com/members/lb7852-ryan/
Thanks for your kind words Ryan. For sure you have a better survival instinct than I and most of people participating to this challenge.
Pleaaaaaaaaaase if that has to happen, come and pick me up. XD
Love,
Da writer.
I think that this was really thought out and very deep and good. It really got me thinking! You should keep working on your writing because I have a feeling that you will do great things in the writing world. Have you ever thought about writing a book?
Thank you!!!!!!!!! Yes. The problem is that every time I start, I do not end. I think I procrastinate too much.
Do you how I could really end a book?
Dear Naani, I really like how you didn’t color code anything you just said the story. which it may have been a little harsh to some but i really liked it! I think you should continue it on and make more stories like that one! Come visit my blog sometim, 21bloomj.edublogs.org 🙂
Dear Naani,
I really like how you didn’t color code anything you just said the story. which it may have been a little harsh to some but i really liked it! I think you should continue it on and make more stories like that one! Come visit my blog sometim, 21bloomj.edublogs.org 🙂
Sure I’ll come and I’ll try my best to satisfy you.
Dear Naanii,
I like how you said at first it was a calm peaceful place and then said that it was chaos. I think you should get into detail about it because it seems interesting to read about. Why is it called “REAL WORLD”?
Because I think that we almost never think deep down about what happens outside our walls and our comfort zone. I think that I really wanted people to reflect because the world is not going as well as we expect it to be. As well as we dream about it. It may be kind of yelling: “THIS IS THe TRUTH, STOP LYING TO YOURSELF AND BEGIN REFLECTING ON WHAT YOU CAN DO TO CHANGE THIS MESS OR ON HOW YOUR LIFE WOULD BE IF DID NOT HAVE THIS LUCK”.
This story is very interesting and I’d love to continue it. I also love to write. How long have you enjoyed writing. And what made you love to write?
-Kaliann
Thanks Kaliann.
To answer your questions, as long as I remember, I think that I began writing since ever. Starting by poems addressed to my mother. Talking about her, she is the one who made me love to write. Every single night she was reading me stories. Telling me about how much she loved to read when she was and how well it helped her at school. Also, she is the one who taught me how to read.
Yes, my mom is actually why I write and for who I write.
I kinda understand what you are saying. I like your writing. its kind of a thing that makes you think. The world can be a cruel place. Could you add a little bit more to your writing?
I know right, it is sad. Yes, it is one of my priority to add more details or even finish the story.
that story was nice
Thanks!
Dear N’naani,
Your story told me that you are funny. The way you put it, it just made me laugh.
Sincerely,
Dalton VanMeter
Finally someone being honest. Habitually, people are just trying to hide that I am funny.
Thank you Dalton.
Your blog is very inspiring. I like how you talked as if the world was a fairy tale, then you add in how it is real world. It is kind of like this whole thing is a turning point. Your blog is actually very peaceful. This makes me think, and I believe that is what makes a good blog.
Thank you Emma, I was not expecting that much (not expecting anything to be honest). Also, I am happy that I can help you to reflect. If you ever want me to write about anything or just want to discuss, tell me.
Willing to write for you,
Da writer.
This is a great story. I tell people to take life for granted and your life is better than half the world. I did some research and found out that if you have a roof over your head your richer than 75% of the world’s population. I’m actually going on a mission Trip to Haiti. Half the kids this they’re life sucks. Well, I tell them wait till we go there.
Oh thank you Gabriel. I seriously did not know about that. I feel disappointed that that much people do not have enough to live and that other people (including me in my bad days) feel unlucky. This sad. I have a question if I am not too indiscreet, what are you going to do in Haiti? Also Can I do anything?
I am very interested in what you just wrote, I think you should do these kinds of stories more often! I see where your coming from when you said, “You have to be as cruel as Cruella…”. It’s true that these very events are going on everywhere, that really sucks..
I know right. I still do not understand how people can be that mean with each other. I’ll try to do more stories like this one so that, with some luck, people can start reflecting about our world a little bit more often.
This made me think of a class I’m in and all we talk about is population. Everyday we talk about is undeveloped/ bad countries and how many people have it so bad. I didn’t know something so small could have such a huge meaning.
Thank you Chaselyn for visiting my blog. I wonder if the class you are talking about is a full course or is it just part of the class program.
Hope you’ll come again.
_N’n